Quiet Poetry Lounge : We Became "One" Today


Well-Known Member
Jan 24, 2004
Brick City
day care provider (own business)
We Became "One" Today
July 19, 2008

We've loved each other through the years,
As we passionally connected with each others tears.

We consciously chose , to grow into this relationship,
And as a result ...We became the best of friends.

Dennis ...I love you
There were times when my life was really insane,
But it took you to love me, pass my pain...
Now, all my dreams have been re-gained.

Whenever my eyes meet yours, I stand captived in a trance,
Because our spirits decided to nurish that chance.
Never could I imagine such an un-dying love sent,
The dark clouds, the storms and the rains been dis-spence!
Returning that love to you... is my only intent.
It's just the beginning of the wonders in store,
As each day grows, we'll have much to endure.

Shrunde ...I Love you
I'm not much of a talker, but a doer in life,
My greatest goal now, is to make you my wife.

We've been smothered by trials and we made it through,
leaping the pit-falls of fire, just me and you.

But today we get the chance to start as "One",
there's nothing you'll want for..under the sun.
I lived most of my life in doubt...
Never knowing or caring what life was about.

I too, was hanging on the rope of "insane",
But God opened the door...and in you came.

So...this is our day, and beside you I stand
In total awe, a happy black man​


Jan 22, 2001
betwixt and between
Website Consultant
This is so beautiful Sister Queen ... :love:

Gosh ... i hope i can say all of that about a man one day ...

Beautiful! God Bless Their Love! :toast:




Well-Known Member
Oct 4, 2003
To grow into love, to not only intensely love one another, but immensely like each other, that's what so well conveyed in this poem. How beautiful Sister queent. :)


Well-Known Member
Oct 16, 2003
London, Babylon
Congratulations on your blessed Union

Many blessings on your union and please tell your other half that his presence is missed at the forum:hearts4:

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