Black Poetry : Untitled..

4EVERLUV

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She said to me, "I love you, but.."
and I stopped her, grabbed the love
and ran.. it was all I really wanted anyway;
told her she could keep the rest.

Peace skuder....
Long time no read, but I can see you still have a way with words.
This tiny scribe speaks volumes on so many levels. I don't blame
you..... I would have took the love and ran too. lol
So nice to read you again.

Much Peace & Luv,
4EVER:heart:
 

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She said to me, "I love you, but.."
and I stopped her, grabbed the love
and ran.. it was all I really wanted anyway;
told her she could keep the rest.

.
Brother Poet Skuderjaymes,

Wonderful. I love the honesty, the brevity and the childlike energy. This piece says what it has to say and then gets out of its own way. You know me though...wondering, what could have possibly come behind that "but" (smile) Truly enjoyed the read.
 

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you know what i mean? can we be that honest? short sweet and complete and yet that love keeps you coming back for more... is it love?
 

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