Black Poetry : ummm...new feelings?

midnightsson

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i cant get enough of your name, its insane
you take up 55% of my brain and i cant maintain
im attracted to you like a moth to flame
its not about self esteem, but how can you feel the same?
is it real or am i reaching for hope in you?
is this a futile dream to have a love thats true?
im lost in my feelings and dont know what to do
i wanna surrender to the sweet bliss that i seek
its like paradise has a window, and you're a peek
you make me feel gentle when i wanna feel tough
you could give me all of you and it wont be enough
my gut says yes but my heart is not convinced
it's been burned once and hasn't been the same since
my greatest fear is for men and womens tendency to cheat
i wish i could read minds but then trust would be obsolete
and without trust, what human can feel complete?
i hate being torn between my own emotions, like a civil war
it could be happiness knocking, but im scared to open the door
unease at the thought of someone in my heart again
but i know that we can never be just "friends"
will it never end, this constant worry and suspicion?
my heart talks all negative, should i even listen?
should i follow my gut and take a risk in loving you,
or should i pretend i dont feel anything new?
when i see you talking to guys why do i feel jealousy?
will i be a coward and let love make me flee?
who can answer these questions but me?
its less painful but it's no hope involved
its like a big riddle waiting to be solved
i used to think i knew love but it has evolved.

Derrick H.
 

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RHYME OR REASON

Thanks for sharing son, gettin' in touch with our emotions-

1poetsought ~
 

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Hey Derrick, like HubrisWolf says, "When women hear this they'll be under your spell" So true cuz I am convinced that you share my predicament. I never once imagined that a guy could feel this way about love, I always thought that y'all are invincible when it comes to the emotion thing! Am I wrong!! Well thanks for sharing I enjoyed this immensely.
 

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you poets make me feel tooo good about just writing what i feel...i thank you all so much for the kind words and the inspiration when i read your poetry and hope you can draw a lil from mine, that way the circle will never break.
 

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