Black Poetry : Random

mzpoetic8705

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Had a vision of incredible pleasure from my
Words delivered to you
And then I read these scriptures of solid completion to my stratified life; here I exist in these walls
Made of love and surrounded by confusion
See, no one understands the simple phrase of love
But if I had the chance to leave myself
I would raise myself
To love myself
To create another one who means
MYSELF
here I lie when speaking
And cry when sleeping
For my face doesn’t allow me to see exactly what I want to
But if it were up to me, I’d kill for someone to hold these
Tears that have fallen incompletely
Still dripping slowly
As time continues to cry these blues
I will have to write these blues in my eyes

Who is the one who can hold a heart without feeling?
Not I,
I have held silly love riddles in my head but
Have yet to figure them out
Who can help one who never helps himself?
Not I,
So I cry for your heart
And lean on your hand for support and
Will never allow my back to give in
But here is where I will sit alone
And burn these pens and papers
So that no one will find me
Alone I sit
Awaiting his arrival
When it will be….I don’t know

to be continued

MzPoetic
 

Tantrum

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He will come
Sister Poet will be the plus
To your poetic equation
Much Love Poet
 

watzinaname

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"But if I had the chance to leave myself
I would raise myself
To love myself
To create another one who means
MYSELF"
Might be my favorite lines from this poem, hard to say.... We all want someone who will know us, be able to sympathize with us, appreciate the uniqueness of us. You expressed these feelings so well. Loving this piece.
 
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