Black Poetry : Random Thoughts On The Last Love

Kori

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*In Your Dreams*
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Thoughts of far away love had me progressing on a downward spiral
Destination=failure:Known, but ignored
Love mobil, sense stationary
I sat constantly asking myself rhetorical questions
Does he love me?
Is this going to work?
Based entire life's hapiness on someone
And he can't be happy with me?
Why!? Too black? Too bold? Nope!
...just physically unavailable.
He couldn't love when it came to me,
But for another so easily done...
Loving her completely.
Bitter nostalgia arrives unwarrented with Polo scent
Salty became his words at the time of commitment.
In love with a man unready
Didn't know what he wanted, but swore it was me.
Oooohhh...the irony
When at first it was I unsure of the journey and he...
Brought me to reality
And now, that I know, he's filled with uncertainty.
We can't ignore love.
but, he's pretending mine doesn't exist.
I still feel it though...I still do
So where are you?
In the arms of hell making heat
Couldn't love me for me
Only an idea of what I should be
He strung me along,
my heart dragged across asphalt
...He tarnished my love corrupted my innocence
If you couldn't handle the responsibility that came with my love,
Why campaign so diligently for the position?
Didn't think it would take work to love...
And it shouldn't have.
But see, you're destructive
Shattering my sould into an endless pile
You took for granted that love and I would remain
Love is transient now, It don't live here no more
Got tired of lies and deceit,
exhausted promises,
tarnished emotions,
Pack it's innocence and truth and was los
YOU HEARD ME!!!
Love got lsot!
I loved so thoroughly, but i missed a spot
Bleach don't kill everything.
But you can't say I never tried...I tried
 

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Kori, felt the emotion here. Please continue to share your thoughts.

Always, love the one you're with (Y-O-U).
 

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The word play here was wonderful. I especially liked these lines: Destination=failure:Known , but ignored
Love mobil, sense stationary
Cleverly written, poet.
 

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very nice piece how u dip and dab wit da poetic game
love this piece here keep droppin it hot
 
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