Black Poetry : Parting Is The Sweetest Sorrow In His Mind

GQ

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It’s been said that love is blind

When it’s gone, we reflect on
whether we could have done
something or said anything to
sweet-talk it into staying around

But in truth, love sees exactly
what the heart allows it to see
and feels what it desires to feel…

This, a mutual interaction, is no exception;
there was and is a purpose to the

WE
& the
US
in poetical love terms

written,
spoken,
&
felt…

but…

no purposeful lines of passion
sought written over two souls
can ever replace what love means
if believed, not merely thought,
to be true

So there are
EYES now very wide open
to a
SOUL that was once very wide shut

Now the floodgates of emotions are
spilling all over in his mind

Ironic isn’t it?

The beginning has no end
as words expressed to like minds
happened over a kewl jazzman’s
song…

intensifying your poetical
"what if" dreams and wishes
to love
your love poet

e~x~c~l~u~s~i~v~e~l~y

perhaps even without much thought
of whether he could dream within
your same dream of WE

l~i~t~e~r~a~l~l~y

So he continues to sing along with
the chorus of your heart beats…

s~i~n~c~e~r~e~l~y

&
from the
deepest of his depths

from where he writes to
keep two together as one

m~e~n~t~a~l~l~y

and his words are
symphonic to your heart’s
soul—thus an inevitable
capturing of

his autographed
quality love scribe
that
seals your dreamy fate

u~n~c~o~n~s~c~i~o~u~s~l~y

&

s~u~b~l~i~m~i~n~a~l~l~y

Unknowingly, you became
a part of him that no one else
nor even he, could see since
he didn’t know until now
that

parting is the sweetest
sorrow in his mind
and in
your own mind
&
you both
believe this to be true

For that reason…

he
simply
asks
of
you

to keep him within your
mental confines so that he
can always be a part
of your life
&
G~R~O~W as your
feelings do for he
who remains

M~O~V~E~D
as he is today, tomorrow,
and forever…

Then there will never be a need
for him to feel such bittersweet
parting sorrow in his mind
again…

©GQINC2K2
 

N2urSoul

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GQ

This is a very mellow piece that speaks volumes! I'm lovin' it brotha... keep on doin' the great things that you do!


N2 :heart:
 

$$RICH$$

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loud & clear ya heard in dis piece
of truth and u wonder what if
as too what i could have done
man ya dead on point...:rolleyes:
 

Rashad

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Very Rich piece poet!

I feel parting can be the sweetist part of sorrow.
Tyte scribe poet! tyte!:)
 

MapleXtract

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Mar 27, 2001
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Well...

...my Gentleman
of Quality. You know
you never cease to amaze
me? It wouldn't surprise me
if you even amazed yourself,
poet. This piece is definitely
where it's at and I felt it
somewhere around right here...:heart:
 

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