Black Poetry : maybe if, before you..

PoeticManifesta

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i got that burning,
not in my panties,
but in my heart
got ideas of death doin us part,
Should have told u from the start,
that you had captivated my heart,
before the time ran out,
before the ship sailed away,
before your letters of love,
before promises of a better day,
Before you went over to that war,
before you went to Karuik,
before I knew that was somewhere in Iraq,
before....
your mother called and told me,
that youd never be coming back,
I should have told you before,
Maybe,
just maybe,
you would have had more to live for,
fighting to enjoy be with me,
with for love, your life,
fighting to make me,
your wife.
It was because of me that you joined,
heart broken,
love torn,
but if I had knew what i didnt know then,
perhaps over seas you would have never been,
If only you cold hear me,
say "i love you",
and i could hear it back,
my heart wouldnt be frozen still,
waiting for my soilder,
to come back.
 

Dlovely

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Keep doing your thang girl. It's hard to let go of a losed love. I know I've been there. Keep your head up.
 

$$RICH$$

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awesome drop sista u really out did yaself here...wow !! poetic
 

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