Black Haiku : learning vanu....

deepy

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a question please...note that i have tried this form in two ways
syllables and words...help me understand which is correct...?
thanks
deepy


new discovery
poetic form
challenging
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yes!


is it 5 syllables, or 5 words first line
thn 4 syllables or 4 words 2nd line, etc..?


my love grows so deep
i am a chasm
jump on in
flood me
now
 

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The first one is correct using da 5 syllables format and so forth on
which forms da flying ~V~ (vankwish) or (Vanwqish) once centered this nu-wave
of creation is taking hold worldwide it's an 15 syllable brotheren of the
17 syllable Haiku

Vaniku is da Vankwish flying ~V~

Thank u for trying my Nu~wave creation please continue to master this form
and help it move into da world of poetic verses and poets mind of writting !
 

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