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ExquisitesOne

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Love's Ride

Where has my love taken me?
A broken heart and a skinned up knee.
You see, sometimes it's like climbing a tree
you think you're on a strong branch,
but it breaks, next thing you know,
the sky's the only thing in your face.

I met this guy once, said he was different,
he'd never do what the other's did,
took my love and ain't seen him since.
Met this one man on my way to school,
he had a shiny new car and just talked so cool,
drove me around in circles and dropped me off at the shallow end of loves swimmin' pool.
Now I met this one dude, he told me he was a stud.
He wore these pretty, fine clothes, and said he had all his fabulous cars lined up in a row...
I coulda had more fun watchin' the grass grow.

Oh well, it's back to Love's drawing board I guess,
Where has my love taken me you ask?
Well, to the heart of experiences' treasure chest
(lookin' at it in a good way is best).
Anyway, I'm off to take another risk...
Excuse me while I go reel in the next fish.
 

ExquisiteBalla

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Definitely feeling your poetic skills
Your relational insight
The way you bring words to light
Your poems could never be "just aiight"
You'll always be my eye's delight.
 

$$RICH$$

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open flow of men on da go
ya love took u to a new beginning
if ya heart is able & willing
u learn in time
as time moves on ya love
awaits u at a Queens throne
 

byin

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From the get, i loved this piece!

Exquisite One wrote:

"Where has my love taken me?
A broken heart and a skinned up knee.
You see, sometimes it's like climbing a tree..."

Aint that the truth, write on my exquisite one Write ON!!!!

p.a.,
byin
 

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