Black Poetry : I Carry a Small Spiral Notebook w/Large Complex Poetry

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This is the means
in which I choose
to present my inklings--

My precious darlings
--These proses are my children
and my childrens' children are their proses

...there are 299 ++ poems
and my genes are in them all
I carry them in a small notebook--
and they hold complex -- deeper meanings

There's an urgency to scribe.

Prizing the delicate ~

The persuading existence of
an anterior motive--

Preserving the decent sense
of the imposter
no matter how intricate

Remnant forgiveness --
funnelling the acknowledgement
of a
singular un-common digression
that slips beneath
the tongues
of empty
pleasures...
...................and leaps
...............................above
........................... ............the
.............................................minds of insipient readers ~~




(c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
 

$$RICH$$

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this u scribe i carry deep down in my soul
gurl ya waking meup wit dis coz my black
book is filled up.........:)
 

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:lol: Brotha, Imma have to be honest, (and I know you love me for doing so)... you be messin' me up with some of your responses! :lol: It lets me know you have a whole 'nother take on my poetry, sometimes its a different edge than from what I'm sayin in the piece...??

I still gotz love for you
anyway Boo ~

Thanks for the read!!

N2
 

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epiphany

Sistah the feeling is mutual! I appreciate your work likewise... and I'm glad you enjoyed reading this piece from out of my notebook!

Thanks sistah friend.

N2
 
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