Black Poetry : Heal Thy Torment!

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Wrapped up in a shell
with no thought of yesteryear
gliding on today and wishin it
would rain, rain so hard it cleanse
thy soul, for thy soul is in torment
torment so bold its beats thy soul,
soul so struck it cant break the hold,
laughin into the memories of control
realizin and spiralling into the deep brings
shameful outcry, outcry so loud it weakens
thy limbs for thy is tumbling down into the pit
of torment, torment so jealous it takes all good
and gives thy its sweet presents of tears and screams
screams heal thy torment and brings escape, escape into
realms of light and remembrance, remembrance gives birth
and silences thy torment and lays it cool hand against the screams
and thy healing begins to invade the soul and sweep its tears in
careful oblivion to await thy treacherous moaning that sears its stab
into the core until thy revelation is spoken, and thy dying dream grabs
hold and soaks until thy glow is shined and thy rainbows of life are again
healed and stroked, stroked and smoothed as thy rush begins, layering itself
in energetic calm to see thy beginning beginning, and thy ends end, and know that thy healed thy torment.
 

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Gee, so much to praise about this. Just the flow of this, was so smooth and intent. The structure, the words cascade outward leading us to the uplifting....discovery. As deeply as I felt the piercing ache of this, the ending made me smile, because the rejuvenation has begun. Wonderful, wonderful piece poet.
 

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just beautiful and uplifting in the drifting breeze
every line touch thy soul
 
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