Black Poetry : Grand Opening

watzinaname

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Oh pen again
I do this dance
quizzically pondering
the entrance of romance
I am open
As my pen lingers in this samba
of words oft used way back when
Ions ago in some senses,
only a moment ago in others.
I sway
hand in hand with my quill
with feathery, flighty movements,
I will...
dip the tip fantastic
openly flowing
in the ink that is you,
tasting and savoring,
learning and growing,
literally and figuratively
submerged in the knowing...
But dancing in lavishly thick Nubian ink
isn't as easy as one would think
Can't just waltz on through
For if you do. you'll miss out
on examining each ebony drop
So, pour it on thick, let your onyx ocean
flow in waves that just won't stop
Let us clasp hands and tango
when the river runs deep and rages
Then we can appreciate the smooth ripples
that inspire me to write infinite pages
I begin to tingle, as your warm ebony
ink slowly fills the chamber of my pen
It in turn oozes a chocolate elixir
onto the parched parchment, and then
each letter,
each word,
each phrase
embraces into this lyrical slow dance
quizzically pondering
the entrance of romance
Oh pen, again...
I am open....
 

$$RICH$$

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I'm here for the opening
of ya grand stand plan
feelin da sway of ya pen
and the ink that drips right in
tasting da flava of ya orbs
like dancin in romance
down to da core
as yo scribe slow roll
dancin in one sweet stroll
yes pen again i'm open
to you and what u do
every drip of ink
every dip of lines
every hance u pose
feel like a red rose

I loved this to heart watz yes i do ..
 

watzinaname

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The dance of the pen
Is a joyous one indeed
Whether blue, black, or red
the ink plants a seed
As words and verses form
the quill strokes broad and free
writing the secrets of romance
Every metaphor
Every simile
Each alliteration
I flow them, openly

I appreciate your response in flow Rich. Thank you, and welcome back!
 

$$RICH$$

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Through every line
pose birth unto the canvas
as the ink bring forth life
words clash by da hand
openly flowin in tune
kissin the page
drippin ink making new beginnings
alliteration and verbs speaks
and the feeling of a grand opening
as the center stage become your
space ...........love this piece
 

4EVERLUV

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sista watz:
This is so eloquently written. The words made my
mind float. Your pen is so beautiful.


Much Luv
 

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