Black Poetry : DRAFT 1 - will complete later

Randee

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Insane Gang

I can't contain the pain
and rage, my whole gangs gone insane
the less time i spend
focused on them
the easier it is to see
a lot of what's been going on
i have noone to blame but me
and my own inadequacies

not that you all haven't done your part
to make me feel worthless, tearing me down, pulling me apart
leaving me dazed and confused
feeling again battered and used
Family when you need it
how convenient
but I continue to stand before you and accept this treatment
wondering why you're talking isht bout me
when your life is falling apart, its easy to see
how you shift attention on what you believe is easy prey
but, a target no more, I have a lot to say
so for once stop moving your lips and pull up a chair
after all the isht you've said about me, this is only fair

Let's start at the bottom and move our way up:

To those without faces and who barely have names
why speak on repeat, what's duplicated is lame
and to those women who love me when I am standing with a brotha
same act like they don't know me is he is absent or with anotha
sister, suffice it to say, are you that worried he likes my lighta *** betta
it don't matter to me, but to let you know, jealousy makes me wetter
and you the one who looks stupid standing with your face getting redder
so the next time you see me working my game at the club
why don't you stop worrying about me and tend to your own scrub

And to the men, you know who you are, if ya gotta ask - we neva met
for just moments spent with me and I leave a poetic impression you'll neva forget
So stop stepping to me with bull$hit lines
I'm not enticed by words spit from lying lips or rumors as red as wine
take off those shades, whats wrong it's midnight dark inside
i want to see the look on your face when i explain the difference between you and I
is like a continental divide

And moving on to those who feel they know me well
whatever you think you know, most likely, ain't half my hell
and the good half of what makes me me I have sure hid
women don't understand that to keep things good can't let noone under your lid
so the next time you get together and you missing me and my bag of black
and can only bunch together lies from half truths a quarter of which were true
why don't you worry about you and the truths you hide
before I blast you back without telling lies
see, your sisters, they rat you out, the minute your gone
laughing at your real pains, and its here I become withdrawn
you see, no matter what you've said about me
i refuse to lower myself to your degree
until I walk a mile in your broke *** knock off shoes
i will never pretend to know what its like to sing your blues
you should be happy that i don't know your type of pain
but don't claim to know me while hoovering cocaine

And to Tony's girl, whomever you may end up to be
read the below, our relationship is nothing but sibling love to me
to him, however, our love is everything
he tells me all the time, one day i will wear his ring
So, woman, we can play this two ways:
be real to my face for I am here to stay
or don't speak at all, either way Tony and I'll be okay
but let me know if I'm infringing on your space
and with all honesty I'll back out of that place
but, with all due respect, if I make the above guarantee
please, just let Tony be Tony, it's what makes him he.

And Tony, seriously, can you do serious for only a minute,
I know that they feel like I am using you
but they don't know how it is between us two
I've never been nothing to you except honest and real
for the feelings you have I simply don't feel
crazy, I know, when you're the one always there for me
i'm not being selfish though, together we're free
from the surrounding drama, bullisht and strife
while making eachother laugh through the crazy times in our lives
But, you'll never be truly happy if you keep looking for true love here
But our kind of love is forever, can I make this anymore clear?

Foxy Aunt Roxie with zero moxie
fixing herself to to men with epoxy
family hugs and love to my face
while behind my back you attempt to disgrace
chomping on ice and spreading lies
you ain't trying to do nothing but get that everyday high
from whomever can put up with your loud *** mouth and twenty in change
your jealous of everyone cuz you always out of your range

Sloane I am way too grown to put up with your lack of retention
two drinks and a hit and of course she'll forget, or is it her lack of attention
so when she opens her mouth thoughts become twisted and fall out
a pathological liar to get out of fire or to look smart and spout
introducing me to her "friends" so I should kiss her *** to no end
what she doesn't quite comprehend is i don't have time to pretend
for some random men she picks up in the bar or on the street
why when she's doing great on her own does she feel so imcomplete
for any descent man who pays attention she merely looks like variety meat.

So why is it after i say all this do i still hold a place for all of you
it seems like whenever i am down you are always there to turn to
to remind myself of where i came from and who i am and how far i've come
to know that in your presence i never have to succomb
remember that comfort is in knowing your surroundings
it doesn't matter that every once in a while you take a pounding.
 

$$RICH$$

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very nice finish it
this was on hit flow on
 
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