Quiet Poetry Lounge : Do I want You?

baller

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Do I want you?
Do I love you?
I have wanted you long before I met you
Before the sound of “hello” caught your ear
I loved you long before that
Do you see where I’m at?
Long before I met you, I watched you from afar
The way you walked
The style of your hair
But my game wasn’t up to par
Do I want you?
Do I love you?
For sleepless night…and glorious days
My thoughts sat heaving upon your face
Studying, with joy, the image of you
Wondering if its beauties are ever so true
Do you see where I’m at?
I’ve loved you long before I touched your face
Or lay within your tender embrace
Or held your warmth within my soul
Or spoken all the things I’ve told
So when you ask, “Is your love really true?”
Or if the whole of me wants you
Know that I will only offer
The things that life and heart hold proper
For deep within this gentle soul
Are wonders and kindness yet untold
These I willingly give to you
Because…
I love you.
 

cherellé

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Dec 19, 2013
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Do I want you?
Do I love you?
I have wanted you long before I met you
Before the sound of “hello” caught your ear
I loved you long before that
Do you see where I’m at?
Long before I met you, I watched you from afar
The way you walked
The style of your hair
But my game wasn’t up to par
Do I want you?
Do I love you?
For sleepless night…and glorious days
My thoughts sat heaving upon your face
Studying, with joy, the image of you
Wondering if its beauties are ever so true
Do you see where I’m at?
I’ve loved you long before I touched your face
Or lay within your tender embrace
Or held your warmth within my soul
Or spoken all the things I’ve told
So when you ask, “Is your love really true?”
Or if the whole of me wants you
Know that I will only offer
The things that life and heart hold proper
For deep within this gentle soul
Are wonders and kindness yet untold
These I willingly give to you
Because…
I love you.


This is so beautiful, all I feel is love pouring out from theses words. alot of us need this, so beautiful. :)
 

Harry Hyman

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Oct 31, 2003
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baller - I love the depth of emotion generated with your declaration. You crafted the words that held this reader from beginning to end, testifying the power in your poet's pen. Good work B. Harry(Namyh)Hyman
 
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