Black Poetry : Coming to the Stage

beautifulblkw

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:qqb015: I was hanging on every word Beautiful expression....... I saw him on that stage.......

he gave them his soul
but treated home like a gimmick
he was good at playing songs
but couldn’t live up to lyrics


I LOVE THIS PART
 

HODEE

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Very Nice Flow
Expression thru poetry and song
Living up to the words and lyrics
Life is a stage
Means everyone must play their part
A single desire or wish for more won't heal a broken heart

Demanding schedules
Work requested deadlines
Every thing else getting all parts of you except those who matter.
Expressing yourself one isnt given time
Rushed are the words
Along with forgotten critical lines

Very deep NittyGrit
This a great flow

he cried in the spotlight
he didn’t deserve
he cried for forgiveness
but didn’t use words
he cried in the key
of lost innocence
he cried for being famous
at his family’s expense

he cried for his daughter
whose life he was missing
he cried through his fingers
and only the guitar listened
 

HODEE

Alonewolf
PREMIUM MEMBER
Jul 2, 2003
5,746
802
Very Nice Flow
Expression thru poetry and song
Living up to the words and lyrics
Life is a stage
Means everyone must play their part
A single desire or wish for more won't heal a broken heart
Everyday in everyway say what needs to be said
Tell those you love and care about
Flow from your heart and your head

Demanding schedules
Work requested deadlines
Every thing else getting all parts of you except those who matter.
Expressing yourself one isnt given time
Rushed are the words
Along with forgotten critical lines

Very deep NittyGrit
This a great flow

he cried in the spotlight
he didn’t deserve
he cried for forgiveness
but didn’t use words
he cried in the key
of lost innocence
he cried for being famous
at his family’s expense

he cried for his daughter
whose life he was missing
he cried through his fingers
and only the guitar listened
 

cocobutterskyn

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At finish your words leave me speechless!
You're an exceptionally expressive poet!


feelin'itsouldeep!
Coco:dance:
 

4EVERLUV

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Peace NittyGrit:
I have to agree with the posters
before me. You really pour this
one out.

Much Luv & Peace,

4EVER
:heart:
 

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