Black Poetry : Bitter Sweet 16...

MzMelanie2u2

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hisili said:
gurl u breakin my heart wit yo words..... wish that u'd had a betta experience wit aging, im just waitin for my tyme to come, and when it does it does, im grateful for tha tyme I've had.. but I do wish I had met u sooner though :-D

Deg C...I read your reply, and it made tears come to my eyes. And you know i got mad love for you too. And like wise, i wish i had met you alot sooner, cuz i know my 16th b-day would've definately been sweet with you there to celebrate it with me. And trust me, now that i do know you, im truley enjoying aging cuz your right there by my side...So just do me a favor, and "KEEP THE LOVE COMIN"...lol...1 :hearts3:
 

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I definitely know what you say, girl. My teenage years were very sad times for the most part. You posed this so well.
 

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feelin the rhymes and the mixture of dialouge within this poem. Nice drop here, keep posting them
 

MzMelanie2u2

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:hiya: everyone....Yall make me feel so at home with my poetry. Comin here everyday and seeing how yall give mad love, is really encouraging to me...So i just want to thank all of you, yall are all such beautiful people and writers...And I've got mad love and respect for each and every last one...so do me a favor, and "KEEP EM COMMIN"...1
:luvu:
 

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most welcome sista........
love so freely and openly make a day more brighter
this what we about embracing each other as we grow
poeticly .......love ya work of art .
 

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