Black Poetry : Battle In the Ocean

rhymebad

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Battle In the Ocean

Write scripts clearly and my ship nearly lost her sails
in the soft hale storm pulled the rope uplifting them to prevail
through the shifting gales the wind replies to the skies, tries to escape
the ship’s anchor mark my rnowned quotes, sharks surrounds my boat great
fright in my heart will fight til dark goal is to net a fish eat with
a wet dish of salad this brisk balad played many times as a gift
its an academic year fish to no limit in here and like Kobe quick
Even Moby **** maybe present ocean full of emotions and sick
Pleasures maybe slick treasures underneath dang just threw a brick
At them sharks still see fins circle in purple this is no cartoon
Grabbed a harpoon and started to shoot and pollute water with bazaar doom
The ocean flow lame will proclaim my life aimed my knife
At the sharks fin bingo like Johnny Ringgo a legit hit very nice
Other sharks became frightened that ended the fighting and strife
I woke from sleep sheets wet from sweat it was all a dream so extreme //
have to stay strap some cats betray rap with tons of guns duck
lead or get struck in the head hell I can’t digest bullets my luck
is bad from that aspect, try pay cash for pearls date shy abashed
Girls they’ll duck a room fill with strangers no thrill when danger flash
random quotes made me abandon hopes of becoming a rapper
rumbling through chapters in searh of words left me in laughter
don’t know the meaning but flow is gleaming here an forevr after
 

Phenomenon

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Talent just streamed from the title to the end. Battle in the ocean, so true and inspiring
 

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