Black Poetry : 1st post ........My daddy or my father?

dignitary

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Which one are you
And how do i know
I call you daddy
But im told "you look so much like your father"
Every tv show family i saw had a father
Even the low budget sitcoms that lasted 1 season
So i want to hear it
What was your reason
Never really got to ask how you felt
Wonder if you think moms deserved help
My daddy or my father i still cant call it
Fathers day that the 3rd sunday in june right,
WAIT
Im not sure if thats what you even celebrate
Well if thats not the case whens daddys day
And better yet what should i get you
I KNOW
Ill package up all my pain, frustration and self-hate
That you gave me
But i know what your thinkin
You're right
I dont think you'll be alive long enough to see it all
My daddy or my father i dont know which one
While i figure it out i guess i will continue to be
YOUR SON
 

Bluewater

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Hi :wave:and Welcome
this is a very deep poem
wonderful first drop
what I like about your tight flow
is how you question
then ponder
seeking the answer
very nice indeed
please do share more
Peace
BlueWater:heart:
 

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very nicely done
welcome to the family
welcome to destee.com poetic playground
welcome from above as i bless dis scribe
flow on peace
 

queentswana

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Hi, ...and glad you're abroad.
just a (little) bit of a big tip: "hate" consumes your entire body and hurts no one but 'the hater'.
This (first) poem was off the hook...I liked it a lot and I felt every word you said. Thanks for letting us in your world...
 
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