Black Poetry : 1st post ever(wanna be poet) please let me know what u think

SwtT

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I agree with lil cherry
You have a lotta skills
There's no such thing as "fine-tuning" poetry
What you write is what your heart wills
So who cares what those dummies think?
You have been blessed with this gift
A gift to move potential mountains
Words that will make soulds lift
Embrace it..........
Welcome to Destees!
 

PlayWitItPimp05

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a perfectly blighted planet where soul-searching i
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Student at MHS.
Babe i must say you got flow
Fo sho you came real
Always take out the time
To say what you feel
Because if you go unspoken
Who knows -- the whole world might chilled
Someone might get killed
Or there'll be the greatest oil spill
In the world, i know you're like
What the hell she talkin bout
Those reasons really 'bite'
They just might
But your fate sweetheart lies in your hands
Always take time to list your wants and demands
The ones you hold dear and the ones you call fans.
By the way babe, REALLY FEELIN YA FLOW MANN!!! :heart:

Actin a lil silly on this thang...holla back @ cha gurl tho!
 

NADIA*BINTA

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SUNSHINE ST
"...but from where I stand in the dark
theres no sign of brigtness in sight..."

yo, i see brightness in your piece... pray you recognize it too... and keep on flowin like you need to... feelin that.... looking forward to readin much more...

peace
 

skrybe7

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I think you got skillz!
I think you only need decide
where you want to be poetically
and then be there!
Peace!
 
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